What is the most challenging part of writing an essay for you? Is it brainstorming, organizing ideas, writing a strong thesis, or something else? How do you plan to overcome this challenge?

 The most challenging part of an essay is turning it from a long stream of consciousness into something that's actually organized. As you know well by now, I like to go on long detailed tirades about things I either like or hate. The most challenging part of an essay is turning it into something someone else would actually want to read.


Today we learned how to start an essay. 


I learned how to effectively start an essay

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